IELTS Academic Writing Task 1: Adult Education
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 – Academic
Source: Cambridge IELTS Test 01 –Â
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
Version 1
The bar graph compares the motivations for adult education, while the pie chart shows that most individuals take responsibility for financing their education. Overall, adults pursue education primarily for a passion for the subject and the desire to gain additional qualifications.
Based on the data, meeting people and the opportunity to shift jobs were cited as reasons for pursuing adult education by 9% and 12% of respondents, respectively. Additionally, 22% of respondents believed that education would improve their current job, while 20% thought it would increase their chances for promotion. The majority of respondents (38%) were focused on obtaining additional qualifications. Finally, 40% of survey respondents expressed an interest in the subject matter, while 20% enjoyed the process of studying.
When it comes to the cost, the survey revealed that taxpayers should cover a quarter of the financial burden for adult education, while employers should shoulder approximately one-third (35%) of the cost. The remaining expenses should be borne by the individual pursuing further studies.
Introduction Version 2
The bar graph compares motivations for adult education, while the pie chart shows the distribution of financial responsibility. Overall, adults are primarily motivated by a passion for the subject and the desire for additional credentials, and most take responsibility for financing their education.
Introduction Version 3
The bar graph compares motivations for adult education, and the pie chart displays the financial responsibility of respondents. Overall, the results show that adults are motivated by a passion for the subject and the desire for additional qualifications, and most respondents take responsibility for financing their education rather than relying on taxpayers.
- Compound: 1 sentence
- Complex: 2 sentences
- Compound-complex: 1 sentence
- Simple: 3 sentences
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